"My Perfect Song" in The OpenDiary (OD) Days!

  • June 8, 2004, 6 a.m.
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"My Perfect Song" - 6/8/2004

i figured i'll put some of my poetry on my diary over time, so incase i lose it, it'll still be here later on :) and i'd love to share it with you guys as well.

MY PERFECT SONG

Here it begins, my perfect song This presence of mind is where I belong I drift away slowly as I hear the tune In a moment of bliss I will be soon

The vivid music sets alight my mind It talks about life, about mankind It makes me realise, although it may seem Creating my life is living a dream

Im a piece of the puzzle in this jumbled-up world Nobody knew if I'd be boy or girl A part of this life, a grain of mind sand A pattern of happiness, so high in demand

I look for in others what they look for in me Lovingness, willfulness and inner beauty Life's an abbreviation, too long to spell Love, Inspire, Fulfil and Excel

I'm music in a song, genre of my choice I listen silently and there is a voice I'm happy and healthy and just move my feet I listen intently and I hear the beat

I'm a part of a song that everyone sings I can live the lives of queens and kings This is a time where nothing is wrong Simply because this is my perfect song

-Matt

 

 

 

Notes: --------------------------------------------------------------------

ryn: ya i wish i could rid all the poison, but i kno your right. ugh....takig evrything one day at a time, i guess.

have faith, stay strong [Satayagraha] 6/8/2004 10:10:16 AM

Awwww...I love it! That was really good! I wish I could write poetry like that. Poetry has never really been my thing. I'm more of a short story and essay type of person, but have always wanted compose a good poem. Anyway, you're from Austrailia huh? Good times! I've always wanted to go to the land down under! I hope everything else is fabulous! See ya!

Chris [4EverSLGson] 6/8/2004 10:36:52 AM

i really like that. Thanks for the note it made me feel special...

Amanda [Love and Hate] 6/8/2004 2:05:28 PM

I like this . Great imagery. I'm going to do some more and put it up sometime too.

Do you use the 'latest notes' button? It helps when people dont always note your latest entry. [TheBlindArcher] 6/10/2004 7:34:33 PM


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