Flash - bistro, furtive, cheesy, coffee, elegant in Flash

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Brenda - Who ordered the onion rings? Who orders onion rings anymore? They are not bistro-friendly. Besides I might want to kiss someone later.

Flannery - I've always liked onion rings. I like the way they burn my mouth when the hot onion slides out of the breading. It makes me feel alive. Doesn't it do that to you? Forget the furtive mousy guy you're going to meet after this.

Chessica - I am neutral on onion rings. My soul is sold to fried cheese curds. They are so decadent and cheesy. I like to dip them in catsup. I think my mother used to tell me to do that.

Coline - I thought we were eating breakfast. I wanted a Denver omlet and black coffee. Besides I'm trying to limit my carbs.

Elaine - Your mother dipped her cheese curds in catsup, Chessica? I thought she was much more of an elegant woman than that. Didn't she force you to take ballet lessons?

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Private Comments

G

6 days ago

Oh, it doesn't have to. It's just speed writing; you write and see what happens. Dialogs are good for this kind of thing.

NorthernTeacher

6 days ago

Brilliant way of incorporating all the words. Contemporary. The conversation makes sense to me.

Florentine

6 days ago

Mmm, cheese curds! I had never ever heard of/had any before moving to the Midwest. Now I'd choose 'em over onion rings, too. Alas, my fried food intake is almost non-existent, so I guess I'll have to have an omelet and a coffee with Coline!