A thousand lovers watch her bleed/My words have seeped in five countries in Poetry

  • Aug. 11, 2018, 5:41 p.m.
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Her chameleon eyes
Drift inside her mind
Hiding the abortion
A vengeful distortion
Out of sight
Out of mind
Her skin sheds
Her porcelain sin
Melting the truth
Inside a lying proof

Sulfurous love
Burning passions from above
A guilty heart
About to rip and part
Running from a life
She knows nothing about

Her hips
Sway with the wind
Lust breeds
Between her bleeding knees
A master of Her
Venusian dreams
For desire strangles her heart
When her soul
Cries and screams
Dreading what she sees

A thousand lovers
Watch her bleed
Sedating her pain
Deceiving Cain
Aborting her eyes
Inside the mystery
She creates
And can no longer find
Her love
Her lost dove


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