What Underlies (Februrary 12, 2013) in Old OD Entries
- Feb. 7, 2014, 2:28 p.m.
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I wrote a poem today and I guess I just feel like sharing it.
I see your eyes
Ones that are consumed with self-pity Ones that try to avoid the glances Fear that they will see
I see your heart One that is pining for love One that will always feel the ache of loss and rejection Fear for your lonliness
I see your mind One that is devoured with regret One that is exhausted from thought Fear for your absence of emotion
I see your soul One that is without color One that is beyond redemption Fear for your life
I guess I would like some feedback...What do you guys think?
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