50 shades of um well.the 3rd one. in yes i'm aware it's 2016.

so I read the last book. in the trilogy. and it was interesting the 2nd was dark. Christian’s broken.and i like that cause I relate to it. it makes him real. [and yes i’m aware it’s fiction]. no but i like that. where you know someone has depression or w/e and it’s.wow.
one thing that really bothers me though. in the book and in general. is ok. so Person A and their friend Person B are talking. and Person B did something stupid and they’re like ‘i was so stupid’ and their friend goes ‘no you weren’t. well you’re not really listening to the person. if you don’t believe they are just state that. like it’s ok not to believe someone. although we don’t appreciate being told that i know i don’t.
and in the book. and this might be bc I read it via the app thingy and not like.via Kindle for the computer. um but they’re like. at Ana’s mom’s for instance. and then all of a sudden they’re at the hotel. [this is just an example]. but there’s not a notice of passing of time. er so in other words. It’s not ‘it was after dinner and we were at the hotel’ kindof thing. it’s ‘we were at the hotel and he was undressing’. so you don’t know how much time has passed between the 2 places. In my fanfic I always put how much time has passed.and the month/day/date.